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How to write a press release that packs punch
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You want to send a press release. You've got some news to tell: you've just won
a new customer or launched a new product; you've appointed an executive, or
you're planning an event. Maybe you want to stamp your opinion on a local issue,
or offer a spokesperson's point of view.
How do you make sure your story cuts through the hundreds of press releases
landing in a journalist's inbox every week?
3 Rules for Successful Media Campaigns
Rule No. 1 is not to clutter your Press Release with too many angles and ideas.
Keep it simple. Keep it relevant to your target journalist's beat. If you have
content that applies to any or all of the items below then you have more than
enough material - so spread it across several press releases.
Rule No. 2 is to set realistic expectations. If you have never written a release
before, the journalist is unlikely to 'hold the presses' for your story. They
need to build up trust - trust that you are the real deal, that you are good
media talent, that your stories are substantiated with facts, figures and items
of interest to their readers, listeners or viewers.
Rule No. 3 is to follow up the 'top 5' media you want to cover your story. But
don't just call to ask if they received your press release. Instead, tell them
something new and exciting - a development or angle not included in the release.
In this way, you will get better results and you'll build that all-important
trusted relationship with the media over time.
Developing Content for your Media Release
Before you start writing your Press or Media Release, think about "who, what,
when, why, where and how" - these time-tested questions will guide you
miraculously through as you develop your content. Here are some tips I wish I'd
known when I segued from journalism into public relations (PR) some 15 years ago.
(1) Who cares?
The first thing to ask yourself before developing your content is "so what?" Who
will care about your news, outside your own team? Identify the 'who' and
'where' of the individuals you want to reach. This includes age group, income
and profession as well as where they reside, play, shop and work.
(2) What will make them care?
What drives your 'who cares?' people? What do they read, listen to and view? Why
is your story important to them, and how can you make sure you convey that
(3) What's in the news?
Keep up to date with local, national and international news. Is something
happening (now or a significant past event) that you can associate with your
(4) Famous brands draw people to your story
If the National Art Gallery, IBM or local government is using your product, say
so! With their permission.
(5) Customer challenges make news What are the current challenges facing your customers/clients' customers? This
is very important as it will remind customers and potential customers about your
(6) Customer solutions make news
What did you do for the customer? Use quotations from your customer - this will
speak louder than any words you can say about yourself.
(7) Trends and issues make news
Are there any new trends you can hang your story on? Hunt the web for analyst
reports that fit your message. Quote the latest Census statistics.
(8) Big numbers make news
Did your solutions save millions/billions of dollars or hundreds of hours? Did
it have an impact on large numbers of people or animals?
(9) Local issues make news
Local press want the local angle - but don't expect a journalist to dig for it.
Tell them in the headline and/or first sentence: Say you are a florist entering
a team in the Bridge to Brisbane fun run: "Flower Power team take to the streets
for Bridge to Brisbane" will do the trick.
(10) Human interest make news
Put some life into your story with real human quotes, not rigid "corporate
speak". Quotes will allow you to get in touch with your readers, they may form
the basis of your social media conversation.
(11) Think social media & SEO
Think about what you would "Tweet" about or post about or blog about: embed
these thoughts in your story, then when your press release goes out on the
web-waves, blast it out on social networks. Use words that people search for -
"keywords" that increase the power of your SEO strategy, driving people back to
(12) Include your top 3 messages
What do you want people to think of your product or service? You may include
these in your 'boilerplate'.
(13) Why should they trust you?
Credibility must be established to make your public relations effective. Do so
by mentioning customers, partners, investors (with their permission) in your
company boilerplate. A boilerplate is a short profile usually found at the end
of press releases that means you don't have to include details about your
company in the story body.
(14) Calls to action - be subtle!
You need to be very subtle with "calls to action" in a press release - it is not
a sales brochure. Try to provide some value to the reader - offer advice, a
freebie or an information pack.
(15) How do you want them to feel?
How should your reader feel when reading your story? This thought will help you
establish the right tone for your release so that you talk straight to what
(16) Use gimmicks - but don't be too gimmicky!
You might be tempted to send a live chook to your chosen media (it's been done)
but don't be tempted to get their attention at all costs. A gimmick that is
highly relevant is fine - a simple example might be a pack of chocolate coffee
beans to launch a new café or online coffee store.
This article was written for justweb™ by Leila Henderson,
Managing Editor, NewsMaker.
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